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The Dimars Regret

With wich are skill is keen
we keep ontop the seen,
Those whom join and help is just
Is but our powers with love and lust,
In great pride we take are fight
to make apon the seen of light,
with good in mind and peace around
We march apon the blood soked ground,
We fight for life and those we protect
To bring apon whom we reserect...

Salem brings apon our hope
To heal us to a point we cope,
He guides are life with deep insites
And tells us all with what he Writes,
He leads us to a cove with haste
And tells us" Now! no time to waste!"
We run along as dragons bite
But we continue on with all our might
into the fire threw the main
The dragons now will never rain
We win our fight threw quiet life
But those we loose is but our knife
Our pain bosts on and we must protest
We need them now and all our nests..

With all his help he fails what's lost
but they died to protect and it was their Cost..
With spirits burning we continue to stand
to the one home we call... The promis land..



Now that I've posted a poem I hope others join in, or comment both would be nice ^-^;  
I made this poem off the top of my head, but after some fixing it actualy sounds like something, so I have successfuly made another poem =3, but I will post my older ones laiter and whatever new ones come to mind. Thank you ^^
very emotionable, loving it. 10/10. You could do this for a living, but i think art is your speciallity. I hope you become an artist!
Aw thank you Firefox ^^;, That meens a ton to me, I've done about 45 poems but there really random in catagory, maybe I'll publish it in the future ^^, but for now it's just fun to make them off the top of my head.

The next one I dunno if you would like, but I'll post more normal poems laiter X3. heres one for those who laugh and icky things"




I cant believe luke from pokecommunity got me to do this XD, But I couldint resist. He asked me to make a song about pie.... But he didint say WHAT pie.. So prepair for this poem, It's about the great big mud pie everyone goes at least 6 times a week XD! aka POOP , and a dog that find it and makes it a meal =3.. Enjoy XD



A Dogs great day XD

I see a pie apon the can * toilet*
and I have a feeling that I cant stand
I sneek up to you and look around
I poke and prod you to the ground
Then my man seens me with you
And so he yells and says to Shoo
I come back laiter and watch again
Since My masters on the mend

I grab you up from the garbage can
And he came again so I now ran
With you in mouth I leave the room
And come to my dish and ploped you in
I look around and soon see my kin
So I bark and snarl and grab you again.

And with one gulp I make you go
You taste so good and chewed real slow
I dont want them to get you for what I know
Is your a big tasty shitty morsel...


Sorry if this disturbed you XD, but it's a funny poem!
Wow, I love it! It shows a great like of pie, and I love food! You should make one about chicken wings. Might be great!

10/10! ~XD
Chicken wings? Give me a sec and I'll edit this with a peom about chicken XD.

All covered in guu these wings are the best'
Who would think it just came from a nest '
I buy them up and eat it like a big Renovation'
As my pop sits on the counter with Condensation.
I leave it there and come back to the counter'
As I look at my belly getting rounder and rounder'
With it's cream on my face I look at the waitress'
As I sit their to see if shes some kinda mistress.
Then I return to my table with yet a bigger tub
She then said yuck and whent back to her cub
The gal turned around as the kid looks with delight
And he begans to walk so she said to "Sit tight"
With white meaty pieces and a drooling sensation..

The boy runs to me and says" it's mine now you see
So I looked at him and knew what I hold is the key.
I grabed up the hot mustard and squirted it down
As the boy looks up and makes a starttling sound


* rest goes to no wher so =/.....

* Will try to finish when I get more verb Ideas"
I'm still making the checken wings one * half way done* but I was asked again by luke, to do one more poem about his own fluke XD* just playing*
So with the wait of chicken wing dance
Heres batmans poem with everything Dence

The Ealu master ballad

batman rushes past all in space
To say this word all over the place
With bombs in hand and booming sounds
He says it here and all over the ground
Among his passers his but a nut
For one little sound which makes him a mut
This word he says if history in motion
for what we call is all but a illusion.
With speedo pants and a bunch of nerve
batman says ualuealuealeuale

Dancing about with big red cheeks
This fat looser has got to reek !
As he dances swet glissens his clothes
he sings and prances at those he Lothes
Holding something with armpits that flow
his enemies go down with one simple blow
he runs from here, around everywhare
As people pass out every which place he's thare!!

one, two, then three enemies round,
as batman now starts to pant and slow down
The Meanies close in with gasmasks in tacked
so batman turns around as his ass is Cracked
With one little look he sees his bomb in hand,
still fully lit he knows this plan is grand.
To make it bigger and more devastating
It drops in his tights as the people strat Ranting


He then runs along to the center of town
as he huffs and puffs like a big fat clown
Then he hits the botton to the bats lair
as they fallow him and fly into the air,
The bomb explodes in his ass with such might,
A bunch of pink fat then begins to take Flight
Like little meteors the people screem and run,
As it plummets down a enemy uses his gun
And gets squished like a pie thats been well overcooked

The plan my friends is to not look up,
As the land is destroyed threw the pink fatty gook
And soo ends the iceage with a plummeting SPLAT
We are now in the age of which all man is FAT


Do whavere you want to it XD, I think cursing is alowed here, so dont mind the times I said ass XD. ENJOY another funny loose you lunch poem!!
Woah...You know I adore your work x3;
Oricle-chan =D keep up the amazing stuff, I laughed alot at some of them x3;;
Wow, this is great! It is good to see an un-sad poem, more so of a comendy poem, 10/10! I made a poem too, so here is the link to the thread. Check it out.
http://mtmoon.pokejungle.net/showthread.php?tid=230
While drawing a picture of rats for someone with angel wings I made this little poem. I guess with how many rats of mine who has passed on.. I had a sort of connection with the other persons rats and couldint help but ease her worries =3.

A rats sweet farewell

So clean and clear with little wings
so graceful do they soar on through
to the wide mound of rainbow rings
these little angels are cleaned anew

Though you miss them as they go
to the place of which is bliss
there is but one thing they know
as you feel their soft little kiss

They are happy and always free
among other angels pure and sweet
As they sit tight to wait and see
for in your passing you're sure to meet
I really like these, A_O. ^^ You sure have a talent!
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