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I was bored, so here it is!^^ The first chapter. I know it kinda sucks, but enjoy it anyways. I may make more if people seem to like it (Also, if you're going to put this somewhere, don't hotlink, as it is hosted on my website and take up my bandwisth -_-)

Lol this is really good for a starting comic person. It is funny too. I hope you continue it

Hey thats pretty good, but the sprites were personally a "little" to big for me.... and the writing was hard to see when the backround was too dark......such as when it was red, but anyways, not half bad.....Good work Pika!

that was funny..

Pika Wrote:Super Constipated Attack

That was not a bad attempt for a first comic, Pikaadavance. There are a few issues I have, however:
- Spelling - I did see a few spelling errors in there (like "conscience" being spelt wrong, but I do not blame you for that one). You should always go back and check before posting them.
- Speech bubbles - I do not have a problem with this. These were done well. However, a plain colour background (like white) behind the text makes it MUCH easier to read. If you do go through with this, I suggest removing the lines that seperate the arrow pointing to the speaker from the beach bubble.
- Sprite size - The sprite size did remain constant for the most part (except when they were big on purpose) so that is indeed good. You never want to have constantly varying sizes.
- The title - The logo was a little blocky, but no doubt it came from a crappy JPEG or GIF.

All in all, it was a good comic, I hope to see more in the future as I do my constructive criticism taking effect.

Your favourite Jaffa,
~ Teal'c

Thanks everyone!^^
Yes, I was a bit lazy with the speech bubbles O.o
SO THATS HOW YOU SPELL IT!!! xD
I shall continue with Chapter 2 once my computer stops being slow on me so I can open a billion paint documents xD

EDIT: Here's Chapter 2!^^ ROFL Tell me whatcha think!

:lol: know that was pretty fun too
not bad,not bad(dab ton)

The gold and green were a little hard to read on that particular background. And it's kinda hard to distinguish it was a dream, I mean I thought there were two Pikachu. You may want to make dream clouds look a little dreamier. More fluffy and perhaps a different colour. But yeah, it was good, and I see you took some of my suggestions.

Lol you rock pika! Both the comic and the writer pika xD