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Okay, plot, will be revealed as story begins (no, seriously, you'll know by reading Chap. 1!)

Anyway, Chapter One:

CHAPTER ONE:

Where am I?



Why is everything so black? Eh? Theres someone... er... a fat person standing in front of me...

"Welcome to the world of POKEMON." he said, but his mouth didn't open. Instead, a box appeared at the floor, showing what he was "saying".

"This is what is called a POKEMON." more text in the box, and a little blue mouse-like thing popped out of a red and white ball e held.

"WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING?!?!?" I screamed, but he didn't seem to hear me.

He said more, and the scary blue mouse thing, apparently a "POKEMON", wnt back into the red and white ball.

"So, are you a boy? Or are you a girl?" an weird-looking boy materilized in front of me, and a box that said:

>BOY
GIRL

appeared next to him. I somehow "clicked" "BOY", and then the fat guy asked "What is your name?"

A giant white box with capital letters appeared.

"J....A...K...E" I spelled, and poked the "CONFIRM" button.

"So its JAKE?"

>YES
NO

I poked "YES", and he said more, but I ignored him.

Suddenly, I was being bumped around in what looked like the back of a moving van. The van stopped, and a light apeared to my left.

"Am I dead?" I thought as a joke as I walked through.

I couldn't help but laugh. Who lives here in this dingy hut?

A woman came through the door. "Here it is, honey! Our new home!" she said.

"Um... who are you, and our new WHAT?!?" I asked.

She didn't say anything, just led me into our new house.

Inside, there were two big... blue things. One was doing something to the TV, maybe squats infront of it, and the other running back and forth in the kitchen carrying a box.

I went up to the one in the kitchen and talked to it... if you can call that talking.

"Gwah gwahgwah!" it said.

"Erm... okay then." I walked away, and Mom, as I have belived her to be, told me to go to my new room and set the clock my "Dad" had got me.

I obliged, walking up the stairs, and somehow ending up in a room.

"Is this my room or do I share one with Mom...?" I wondered, than realized there was only one bed. "Where does she sleep?"

I checked the clock, and suddenly I couldn't see me anyomre... wait, I could see... me? Anyway, the colck read "11:20".

I checked the watch I used to have but no longer owned. Maybe that fat dude took it.

I left the clock untouched, and Mom came upstairs.
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Eh? Eh? Good? Bad?

That's a really cool story. I hope your Torchu evolves soon. I'll try to send you a PM, but it usally dosen't work.

That's a pretty nice idea you've got there, using the game as the main plot but this time you get sucked into the game nice twist.

Thanks, I know... I'll update later, gonna go play DF or watch some flash or go to YouYube. Bye!

I'm sorry but that just didn't interest me. I'm sure being inside the game hasn't been done enough to the extent that it's like an adventure story but the lack of description or even basic adjectives did not draw me in.

Quote:Instead, a box appeared at the floor, showing what he was "saying".

In there I found many places adjectives could have been used to make that three lines alone. I mean, what was it like? Were you standing on it as though it were a constantly changing floor? Was it a hologram? Did it scare the crap out of you too?

But yeah, this story could be good.

Um... what? I'm 11. I hardly know what an "adjec-whatever" is.

CHAPTER TWO:

PROF. BIRCH, you surprise me.


"How do you like your new clock, JAKE?" Mom asked.

"How would I know? I don't even know if thats the right time." I answered.

"DAD's friend PROF. BIRCH has something for you."

"Um.... why are all names in caps?" I asked, pointing at the text box covering part of the floor and my bed. It seemed I couldn't move when someone was talking to me, so I couldn't get a very good look at it.

"Shhh... He'll hear you!" Mom hissed in my ear.

"Eh? Whos He?" I asked, not lowering my voice.

"Shhh... Power Out, he'll here you!"

"Eh? Who's 'Power Out'?" I asked, lowering my voice.

"He's the one who kills us!"

"K-k-kills?!?" I was frightened by this. "You mean I could die here?!?" I was shouting now. I thought I saw the power flicker for a split second.

"Eep... well, just hurry up and save!" Mom was getting worried.

"...How?" I probably sounded stupid.

"JUST GO TO PROF. BIRCH'S HOUSE!!!!!!" she screamed. I thought I saw her sprite grow and her "skin" turn red.

"OI!!!" I hurried down the stairs, ignoring the news report on the TV.

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"MAY, I'm going out to do some field work!" PROF. BIRCH said to his daughter.

"Okay!" shouted MAY from upstairs. "Now to hide downstairs under the kitchen sink until the next unlucky Brendan comes to be my rival." MAY went downstairs and went in the sink.

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"Hello?" I asked, coming through PROF. BIRCH's door.

"Oh, you must be JAKE." said the woman at the table, walking towards me.

"HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME, STALKAH?!?!?" I shouted.

"Its in the script." she said.

"Oh, that makes sense." I said sarcastically, slowly nodding my head.

"Well, MAY is upstairs, shes about your age."

"ABOUT my age? Is she like, twelve, or something?" I asked.

"No. Shes ten."

"Ooookay, then." I went up the stairs, and, whoop-dee-doo, ended up in a room identical to mine. "Stalker..." I muttered. "Wait, MAY is suppossed to be up here." I saw the Pokeball on the carpet, and poked it.

MAY came in. "Oh, hi. You must be JAKE."

"STALKAH!!!" I screamed.

"Eh? No, no, my dad knows your dad and he told me your name!"

"Oh. Okay."

"Well, I'm MAY, and, um... I have this dream to be friends with all POKEMON."

"You mean those arm-less mouse things?" I asked.

"No, a POKEMON. Thats an AZURILL."

"I see..." I lied.

"Well, I'm going to stay here, but the script says you go to my dad's lab, but hes not there, and then you proceed down ROUTE 101." she said, reading an invisible script.

"Okay..." I went downstairs and left.

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"Well, ZIGZAGOON should be here, where is it?" PROF. BIRCH saw ZIGZAGOON at a tree, urinating on it. "OH GEEZ!!! Hurry up and chase me, I need to scream 'Help!' before JAKE gets here."

~~~

"AHH!!! HELP ME!!!!!" a voice shouted, though I couldn't here it.

"Man, that text box is annoying..." I muttered. I ran up to where the scream came from. It was the only place it could've came from, being the only way out of town.

When I got there, I saw the fat guy, who I assumed was PROF. BIRCH, being chased by a... thing.

Adjectives are words that describe something. Like

"That ball is yellow", in that sentance, the word "yellow" is the adjective.

Oh, I see. Oh, right, I knew that, I just forgot. Heh heh, stupid me n_n

EDIT:

CHAPTER THREE:

What. The. Hell.


"Choose a POKEMON from that bag!!!" PROF. BIRCH shouted, running in circl- er, squares.

"A POKEMON?" I asked lamely. "Er... okay." I walked over to the bag and poked it. "WHERE AM I?!?!?" I shouted, when suddenly all I could see were a bag and two Pokeballs. The other had a white circle popping from it, with a green lizard-thing.

"TREEKO
WOOD GECKO POKEMON"

It said. I moved the circle over, and the Pokeball in the middle showed a red-orange chicken.

"TORCHIC
CHICK POKEMON"

That one looked promising, but just to be sure, I checked the third one.

"MUDKIP
MUD FISH POKEMON"

No. J-just no. I'll go with TORCHIC. I poked TORCHIC's Pokeball, and I could see myself again! Now, kill the raccoon thing.

"Wild ZIGZAGOON appeared!

Go, TORCHIC!"

Whoa, freaky! I could see my Pokemon and the raccoon, which I now take to be a ZIGZAGOON.

TORCHIC appeared to be "Level 5", whatever that meant, and ZIGZAGOON was level 2.

A box appeared, and it said:

>FIGHT BAG
PKMN RUN

I selected "FIGHT", and I saw a new box. Yipee.

>SCRATCH GROWL
- -

I selected SCRATCH, and TORCHIC kind of just... moved forward for a second and a scratching animation appeared on ZIGZAGOON.

The text box said:

TORCHIC used SCRATCH!

No duh, I thought.

Wild ZIGZAGOON used TACKLE!

What. The. Hell was that?

>FIGHT BAG
PKMN RUN

Fight again.

>SCRATCH GROWL
- -

Scracth again.

TORCHIC used SCRATCH!

ZIGZAGOON used GROWL!

What the hell was that?!? Red... lightning bolts came out of ZIGZAGOON's head, and TORCHIC turned striped, and the text box said:

TORCHIC's ATTACK fell!

Mmmkay, Fight, Scratch.

TORCHIC used SCRATCH!

Wild ZIGZAGOON fainted!

Eh? It fell in the ground and disapeared.

TORCHIC got EXP, whatever that is.
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*YAWN*

lol, funny ^^ im gonna keep reading

Sorry, but this is kinda lame, it's just a description of the game itself. I apologise for being blunt but that's the way I am. Bye.