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heres a pokemon comic i've been working on, ill update this with other parts of it when i finish them. also this comic is rated R for violence and bad words, so dont look if you dont like that kind of stuff. (remember: its your choice to look, no ones forcing you)

anyways heres the URLS in order so click on them in order to read the who comic.
the comic is called ~A Tour Of The Region~

PART1:
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p195/...npart1.jpg

PART2:
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p195/...npart2.jpg

PART3:
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p195/...npart3.jpg

PART4:
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p195/...npart4.jpg

PART5:
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p195/...npart5.jpg

i hope you enjoy!!

I only caught one piece of bad language which you could have easily subbed with Shoot or Crap. It really doesn't need to be rated R if you get rid of that word^^;;

Well I'd give this an "M" rather than R. But if there isn't excessive violence and very little swearing I can't see why we can't let this continue.
Seriously, we really can't have anything bad on here these days.

It wasn't thad bad in terms of violence, I saw 3 swears which you could have bleeped or done what Pika said below.

pikaadvance Wrote:I only caught one piece of bad language which you could have easily subbed with Shoot or Crap.  It really doesn't need to be rated R if you get rid of that word^^;;

However, cr*p is also a bad word, so that would need to change to crud. But there was an f and an s in there,, both of which could have changed, otherwise quite good.

ok, ill change it to M rated when i get home. also, ill make sure i leave the swearing to a bear minamum. also, if there is some blood/gore ill make sure to warn you exstensivly so no 1 who doesnt want to see that stuff doesnt see it. im not home other wise i would post the 6th and 7th part of the comic, but im a school....