03-25-2007, 11:31 AM
Hello! This fic was a request, and, while this is the proluge, the real chapters will be two pages in Word. Sounds good, doesn't it?
~~Proluge~~
A asteroid, lost someone in the wide, sparkling, yet somehow quiet, but crawling with creatures universe. Upon it, with even the best eyes and ears, it would seem silent, like the dead of night. Yet, at the same time, it was noisy.
Suddenly, on the lonely planet, a white figure dropped down. It had curly things on it, colored green and speckled with a sunset color.
The god of Pokemon. Known to few, seen by none. An Areusus, thought only to be a myth.
If it wanted to, it could change to any type at all. Yes, any. From the mind reading Psychic, to the fiery rage fire.
It could use any attack it wanted to, any one. It could use Silver Wind, Petal Dance…the possibilities were endless. There was a whole galaxy of attacks it could use.
Yet, it was smaller then a normal one, but still, more powerful then one could believe.
The son of the God, most likely.
Out of nowhere, or maybe a rock, a powerful, psychic blast of energy appeared. It appeared like a shooting star, no one knew it would come, but it did, and, it caused much harm to poor Areusus, or as he called himself, Arisi.
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I think it sounds great so far!! I don't really have anything to add....
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Really? It'll most likely be up today!
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Great!! I made one (Adventures through Shikoku) but yours sounds waay more exciting.
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Thanks. Just a tip, use similies and descripition, and use something like Word.
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Okay, I'll do that. ^.^ Thanks for the tip!
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Bad news. I can't write mine on Word anymore, I now only have my password here, so I'm gonna have to type it in this PM, if you don't mind...
{Fighting} F*O*R P/O/W/E/R
A asteroid, lost someone in the wide, sparkling, yet somehow quiet, but crawling with creatures universe. Upon it, with even the best eyes and ears, it would seem silent, like the dead of night. Yet, at the same time, it was noisy.
Suddenly, on the lonely planet, a white figure dropped down. It had curly things on it, colored green and speckled with a sunset color.
The god of Pokemon. Known to few, seen by none. An Areusus, thought only to be a myth.
If it wanted to, it could change to any type at all. Yes, any. From the mind reading Psychic, to the fiery rage fire.
It could use any attack it wanted to, any one. It could use Silver Wind, Petal Dance…the possibilities were endless. There was a whole galaxy of attacks it could use.
Yet, it was smaller then a normal one, but still, more powerful then one could believe.
The son of the God, most likely.
Out of nowhere, or maybe a rock, a powerful, psychic blast of energy appeared. It appeared like a shooting star, no one knew it would come, but it did, and, it caused much harm to poor Areusus, or as he called himself, Arisi.
~~Proluge~~
A asteroid, lost someone in the wide, sparkling, yet somehow quiet, but crawling with creatures universe. Upon it, with even the best eyes and ears, it would seem silent, like the dead of night. Yet, at the same time, it was noisy.
Suddenly, on the lonely planet, a white figure dropped down. It had curly things on it, colored green and speckled with a sunset color.
The god of Pokemon. Known to few, seen by none. An Areusus, thought only to be a myth.
If it wanted to, it could change to any type at all. Yes, any. From the mind reading Psychic, to the fiery rage fire.
It could use any attack it wanted to, any one. It could use Silver Wind, Petal Dance…the possibilities were endless. There was a whole galaxy of attacks it could use.
Yet, it was smaller then a normal one, but still, more powerful then one could believe.
The son of the God, most likely.
Out of nowhere, or maybe a rock, a powerful, psychic blast of energy appeared. It appeared like a shooting star, no one knew it would come, but it did, and, it caused much harm to poor Areusus, or as he called himself, Arisi.
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I think it sounds great so far!! I don't really have anything to add....
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Really? It'll most likely be up today!
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Great!! I made one (Adventures through Shikoku) but yours sounds waay more exciting.
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Thanks. Just a tip, use similies and descripition, and use something like Word.
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Okay, I'll do that. ^.^ Thanks for the tip!
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Bad news. I can't write mine on Word anymore, I now only have my password here, so I'm gonna have to type it in this PM, if you don't mind...
{Fighting} F*O*R P/O/W/E/R
A asteroid, lost someone in the wide, sparkling, yet somehow quiet, but crawling with creatures universe. Upon it, with even the best eyes and ears, it would seem silent, like the dead of night. Yet, at the same time, it was noisy.
Suddenly, on the lonely planet, a white figure dropped down. It had curly things on it, colored green and speckled with a sunset color.
The god of Pokemon. Known to few, seen by none. An Areusus, thought only to be a myth.
If it wanted to, it could change to any type at all. Yes, any. From the mind reading Psychic, to the fiery rage fire.
It could use any attack it wanted to, any one. It could use Silver Wind, Petal Dance…the possibilities were endless. There was a whole galaxy of attacks it could use.
Yet, it was smaller then a normal one, but still, more powerful then one could believe.
The son of the God, most likely.
Out of nowhere, or maybe a rock, a powerful, psychic blast of energy appeared. It appeared like a shooting star, no one knew it would come, but it did, and, it caused much harm to poor Areusus, or as he called himself, Arisi.