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Here just post any type of ghost stories (real or fake). I'll start with a few. These are some stories that my mom told me and my brother, and my sister, and my dad. THEY ARE REAL! These all happened at my Mom's business that she started.

1.Once she was sitting in her rocking chair and and she looked in one of the rooms where all of the babies play. (She's a babysitter.) And she saw a white smoke rise from the ground. it twisted upward but it didn't break off like cigar smoke. bit it stayed in a straight line and turned sideways. it went in a straight line again and disappeared.

2.Once about 6 or 7 years ago when a baby named Joshua suddenly pointed over my Mom's co-worker and said "Look, what is it?" and she looked up but there was NOTHING there. Then she started to smell an strong sulfur-like smell. Kelly (Mom's co-worker) said "Said, where, what is."
Josh said "It left it isn't here anymore, it's gone."

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Ill join. i have a really long story. read it an weep.

George and Kristina

ghost doll



Contents
Prolog pg.1-2
Chapter 1: The Brensons pg.2-3
Chapter 2: Fright night pg.3-4
Chapter 3: Beliefs all around pg.4-5
Chapter 4: G.H.O.S.T. pg.5
Chapter 5: The reveal pg.6
Chapter 6: James Brenson pg.6-7
Chapter 7: The story of James Brenson pg.7
Chapter 8: ‘Frank’enstein pg.8-9
Chapter 9: George’s idea pg.9
Next book pg.9
Chapter 10: Pictures
Prolog:

A stormy night, Sereana and Frank Brenson were in their basement. “Frank” said Sereana. “Look. I found my old toy chest from when I was a girl.” Sereana looked through the chest. “Hey, my old raggedy Ann doll.” Said Sereana. “Hey, is that the same thing you used to throw around after you got older?” asked frank. “Yes.” Said Sereana. Now it’s all torn up. I remember, when you married me, you ripped it. The poor thing.” She put the doll on the shelf. They went to eat Dinner

Sereana had bad dreams that night. They were about the doll. It was taking over her mind. She woke up in a cold sweat. Sereana ran downstairs to the shelf. The doll wasn’t there. She heard a voice. “Hello, Sereana.” It was the doll. “Remember what you did to me? Its time to return the favor.”

“Wow.” Said Police chief Dale. It was the next morning. “This is the weirdest case yet.” He was referring to the Sereana Brenson Case. “What was it?” Asked another policeman. “What kind of killer hangs their victim, And Leaves their Leftover rope in the hands of a raggedy Ann doll?”






[20 YEARS LATER]




Chapter 1: The Brensons

George Brenson [11 years old] and Kristina Brenson [18 years old] were watching Ghost hunters. It was a show made by a real ghost hunting company Named G.H.O.S.T. [Ghost Hunters Of Sandgem Town] The brensons lived in Sandgem town. “This is all scripted.” Said George. “What do you mean?” Asked Kristina. “They Photoshop all this ghost hunting stuff for ratings.” Said George. “Everyone knows that ghosts don’t exist.” “That’s not true.” Said Kristina. “What about ol’ Great grandma Sereana and the raggedy Ann doll?’ “What?” said George. “A long time ago, great gramps claimed that a raggedy Ann Doll killed his wife, and nearly him. It was in this house. They put him in a loony house. “ Said Kristina. “Well that’s probably because he was loony.” Said George. “Well, Come on. I need to get to the mall to get some food.” Said Kristina. “Awwww…. I want to stay home and play game cube.” Said George. “You have to come with me.” Said Kristina “Mom and dad left me in charge while they go onto their year long trip to Tokyo. You have to follow my rules.” So they went to the mall. When they came back, it was 7:00. Kristina was asleep on the couch, and George was watching TV. Suddenly, George saw something out of the corner of his eye. He looked again. Nothing there. He must have been seeing things. The sunset was probably making reflections. He drew a picture of a tropical island. Then he took a picture of it with his camera. Then he took a picture of himself with it from far away to show he made it, so he could submit it on the Internet. When he put the picture on the Internet, He saw something very unusual. There was a white orb Right down the middle of the picture. In the Far away picture, there was a Doll floating next to George. But, not just any doll. It was a raggedy Ann Doll.










Chapter 2: The fright night

“Kristina, Kristina! Wake up!” Yelled George. “What’s wrong?” Said Kristina, wearily. “Look at this picture!” At that second, the laptop totally shorted out. “What picture?” asked Kristina. George was stunned at what had just happened. “What did you do to my computer?” asked Kristina angrily. “Uhhhh…. I saw….” Sputtered George. Mabie He was just seeing things. But that didn’t explain the computer breaking.

At 8:00, George watched more ghost hunters. It was kind of addicting. There was this one where they used a Tape recorder to hear the ghosts speak to them. George heard a crash in the kitchen. He looked. A pan had fallen. But the funny thing was, that the pans were all stored in the cabinet. The cabinet was closed. That was odd. And the pan was at least ten feet away from the Cabinet. Odd. No matter. George went back to the TV. On this ghost hunters episode, they used heat censors to see the ghosts. Suddenly, the light near the wall blew out. As George went to replace the bulb, some writing caught his eye. It was on the wall.

Beware of The Killing doll…

George thought right away that Kristina had written this, to make him believe in ghosts. He still didn’t. “Kristina!” yelled George. “What?” Kristina came into the room. “Nice try,” Said George. “But you didn’t fool me. Now you can start cleaning this up.” “What up?” said Kristina, innocently. ”This writing on the ---“ The writing was gone. “Is this some kind of joke?” Asked Kristina. “No… I… It was there a minute ago. Really.” “Right, and they’re electing Mickey Mouse as our next president.”
















Chapter 3: Beliefs all around

After all this happened, George went to bed. He thought he was just really tiered, and needed rest. So he did. He woke up in the middle of the night. He went to the kitchen to get a glass of water. As he walked out, he saw a doll in the door. Staring at him. “Ugh… not this again.” He closed his eyes and opened them again. The doll was still there. “Hi, George. Are you ready for your Whipping?”

“AHHH!” George woke up in a sweat. That was a weird dream. “I gotta lay off the doughnuts before bed.” Suddenly, there was a scream from Kristina’s room. George ran in. Kristina said “There… there… Th… there… was a… a… Gh… Ghos… ghost… Right there…………” she was pointing to the Wall. There was nothing there. “It was just there… I swear…” said Kristina. “Don’t you believe me?” “Yes, I do. Said George. “I’ve been experiencing weird stuff too.” George realized that he wasn’t just seeing things. All this was real.
George and Kristina both slept in the living room. At about 3:00 AM, George and Kristina woke up to a loud crash in the kitchen. When they got in there, there was a ghostly old woman floating above the table. The ghost said something. Her voice was like metal scraping against metal. “BEWARE OF THE GHOST DOLL. I WASN’T BEWARE. IT GOT ME. BEWARE OF THE GHOST DOLL.” She said. Then she vanished. Now George and Kristina were terrified. They went to bed. George realized that this might go on every night. They had to do something about it. And fast.



Chapter 4: G.H.O.S.T.

George knew he had to do something, or the ghosts would haunt them forever. They decided to call the professionals.
Two hours later, G.H.O.S.T. was at the Brenson residence. “You’ve had super natural activity?” said one of them. There were six. The leader was Chris P. Flesh. The other five were Mike, April, Brian, Max, and Kev. “yes.”Said Kristina. George and Kristina told them about all the stuff that happened to them. G.H.O.S.T. Said that they would stay over night, and see what they find. George asked them how they always had some free time. Chris said that they have their ways. George could’ve sworn he say the faintest smile from chris for a split second.
That night, at 7:30, G.H.O.S.T. started their investigation. They set up all their cameras and radars. Georg and Kristina went to sleep in Crises van. Chris and Kev went to the kitchen, April and Mike went to the living room, and Brian and Max went to the attic. The shut off all the lights.
Chris and Kev were investigating the kitchen. They had a Heat censor. It would show a spot with extreme heat or extreme cold for a ghost. They turned it on. Nothing abnormal. They started goofing off. Kev picked up a pan. Suddenly, it shook. Hard. Kev let go and looked at the heat censor. At first, they didn’t see anything. Then, a big, human like heat source walked around the corner. Then it went back. Chris and Kev went to investigate. There was nothing there. They decided to leave the heat censor there, incase the ghost came back.
Mike and April investigated the living room. They had a voice recorder to record the ghosts. “Is there anybody in this room besides us?” said Mike. They waited a second. “If there is, do something to show us you’re here.” Said April. After about 30 seconds, the light near the wall fell to the ground. Mike looked at it closely. The table had a lip, so it couldn’t have fallen without someone pushing it. “Why do you haunt this place?” asked mike. “How did you die?” April and Mike thought that they had asked the ghost enough. They thanked it for its time.
Brian and Max went to the attic. They weren’t going to use any fancy instruments. Instead, they were going to use the simple video camera. They left it up there, and goofed off.



Chapter 5: The reveal.

For the rest of the night, G.H.O.S.T. didn’t see anything else unusual. The next day, at about noon, they showed George and Kristina what they found. “Well, you’re definitely haunted.” Said Chris. He showed them all they found. First, the heat censor. After Chris saw the heat source, he and Kev left the censor there. Shortly after they left, the heat source came back and put something over the heat camera. The tape recorder picked up two voices. First, it was a snakelike voice saying “ SHOW SOME RESPECT, COWARD.” The other voice sounded different. Like an old lady. “BEWARE OF THE KILLING DOLL. BRING ME GEORGE……” The video camera in the attic picked up nothing. “Yes,” said Chris, “Your house is definitely haunted.” So, you would imagine that George and Kristina would be pretty scared now. You’d be right.












Chapter 6: James Brenson

George and Kristina were terrified. They didn’t know what to do. There were still so many questions. Who was the old lady? Who was the ghost doll? What do they want from him? At 8:00, George and Kristina were scared. They fell asleep at around 10. George was woken up by a loud crash. He looked up. “uh….. Kristina…..” “What?” she snapped. “I think you should look at this.” The old lady stood in front of them. Kristina looked up. And screamed. “COME WITH ME. TO THE ATTIC.” The old lady dragged them up to the attic. “Let me go!” shouted Kristina. She continued dragging them. Until they got to the attic. Then she stopped. They went in. “Wh… what do you want with us?” asked George, shaken. “What are you going to do to us?”
“I WANT NOTHING MORE THAN FOR YOU TO BE SAFE.” “ Then why did you drag us up here?” asked George. “SO YOU WOULDN’T RUN AWAY, GEORGE. I THINK I NEED TO TELL YOU THE STORY OF JAMES BRENSON.” “ok, but, who are or were you?”asked Kristina. “YOU DON’T KNOW? WELL, IM SEREANA BRENSON, OF COARSE.”












Chapter 7: The story of James brenson.

“A LONG TIME AGO, THERE LIVED A BOY NAMED JAMES BRENSON. HE DIED IN HIS HOUSE AT THE AGE OF 15, DUE TO A SICKNESS. INSTEAD OF GOING TO HEAVEN, HE FLEW RIGHT INTO A RAGGIDY ANN DOLL. EVER SINCE, HE HAS HAUNTED THOSE WHO ABUSED HIM. I AM TRYING TO PROTECT YOU, GEORGE. YOU SEE, I WROTE ON THE WALL, AND YOU HAVE SEEN ME ONE TIME OR ANOTHER. THE DOLL MAKES MOST OF THE NOISES AND THINGS LIKE THAT.” “But, why does the doll want me?” asked George. “YOU… YOU LOOK A LOT LIKE MY HUSPAN WHAN HE WAS YOUR AGE. HE RIPPED THE DOLL A BIT. WE HAVE TO STOP THE DOLL.” “How do we stop it?” asked Kristina. “THAT, I DO NOT KNOW.” Suddenly, the door opened. “HELLO. I M THE GHOST DOLL.”The doll walked in the room. George looked to Sereana for help. The old lady was gone. “ WHAT KIND OF ROPE DO YOU WANT?”
George threw a knife from the ground at the doll. It spit in two. Then it melded back together. “You know Frank,” It said. “You cant kill a ghost.”








Chapter 8: ‘Frank’enstien

“I’m not Frank!” yelled George. “DON’T DENY IT. YOU MUST DIE.” “No. Im not frank.” George repeated. “But, why do you want to get him so bad anyway? He just ripped you a little.” “You don’t understand. A rip in an ordinary doll is no big deal. But, when there is a being possessing the doll, It hurts. Bad. So, frank, ITS TIME FOR YOU TO BE RIPPED.” The doll came closer. “NO! STOP!” Yelled the voice of a man. He was really old. His hair was long and grey. He looked really beat up, though. Like he got here in the back of a moving truck. “WHO ARE YOU?” “I’m Frank Brenson.” Said the man. The doll was outraged. “WHAT? WHAT? THIS ONE IS FRANK BRENSON. NOT YOU. OR AM I MISTAKEN?” “Yes, you are mistaken. I am Frank Brenson. The boy is George Brenson. The girl is Kristina Brenson.” “WELL….. JUST TO MAKE SURE….. YOU ALL DIE.”

















Chapter 9: George’s idea

“Oh, no!” cried Kristina. “Now what?” “I don’t know…” said george. “Wait! I have an idea!” “well, what is it George?” asked Frank. The three ran to a closet and whispered.
James was getting annoyed looking for them. He could float through walls, but not see through them. “Hey, over here” yelled George. He was a sitting duck. James floated quickly over near George. He was about to pounce, when he was stopped by an old man. Frank. “James.” He said. “Why do you want to do this?” “Because you ripped me. You. You see, back a while ago, I was about to b e free of this doll. But, since it was broken, it was no longer leavable. You trapped me. Do you know how awful it is being a doll? Nobody takes you seriously.” “Keep stalling him, Frank.” Whispered George. Then he yelled “Hey doll!” “What is it, you ignorant child?” “It’s time to Rise and Shine!” “WHAT???!!!” George opened the curtains.it was 5:30. The sunrise. The light shined right onto James. Then, something amazing happened. Thick, Dark mist came out of the doll, and did what seemed like burning in the sunlight. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!” The doll fell limply onto the ground. There was a string on the back. George pulled it. Surprisingly, it talked. “I love you.” It said. “Drop Dead.” Said George with a grin.















Chapter 10: pictures.

“So, how do we know if James is really out of the doll?” asked Kristina. “All we need to do” said Frank. “Is take a picture of it. If it shows up, Then its clean. If not, its still James. Because Ghosts don’t show up on pictures if you can see them with the naked eye. Same with the other way around.” George took a picture of the doll. It showed up in the picture. So, It was not a ghost. “Well, I guess my work here is done.” Said Frank. “Frank” said George. “Where are you going to go now?” Frank hesitated. “I- Im going back to the… uh… back to the loony house. Its my home.” “Ok.” Said Kristina. “but can we take a picture of you to remember you?” “Of coarse.” Said Frank. George started to take the picture. “Ugh… Battery out. Ill use the disposable. George took the picture. “Ill get it developed tomorrow.” “Bye, George. Kristina. See you around.” “Bye, Frank.”



[The next day.]

George and Kristina went to get the picture developed. Twenty minutes later, The got their picture. George looked at the picture and gasped. There was nobody there. Just an empty doorway.
































“That’s them, boss?” two people were Hiding in the back of the store. “Yep. That’s George Brenson. That’s the one. Heehee……”


Next book:


George and Kristina: Race against time.
Mario Wrote:Once about 6 or 7 years ago when a baby named Joshua suddenly pointed over my Mom's co-worker and said "Look, what is it?" and she looked up but there was NOTHING there. Then she started to smell an strong sulfur-like smell. Kelly (Mom's co-worker) said "Said, where, what is."
Josh said "It left it isn't here anymore, it's gone."
I'm sorry but this just sounds like someone farted XP
I might join. I like ghosts.=P
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