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Hello Mt.Moon!
It's 11:30 P.M right now and I just CAN"T get to sleep. So, I decided that this woould be the perfect time to post up my very own Yu-Gi-Oh! adventure, starring my fav character, Aster Phoenix, and his quest to rescue his long lost father, who turns out wasn't assassinated, from the dreaded Shadow Realm. Here's Episode 1!

Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 1: Obnoxious Spirit, Origin of D-Hero Plasma!

A clap of thunder echoed in the stormy sky. Millions of tiny rain drops fell from the huge, dark rain clouds. From his bedroom window, Aster Phoenix watched, with his mind wandering.
"Something's about to happen."
That's all he thought of. Then, he felt a sudden urge to pull out his Duel Monster Deck. As he pulled it out of his Duel Box, the Destiny Hero - Plasma card revealed itself. Aster picked it up, studying it closely.
" I know you have a meaning to me. But what is it......."
Asster started to have flashbacks of his duels with Plasma. Against Sartorious, against Adrian, and against Jaden...............
All those times, Plasma failed to bring Aster victory. But still, Aster treasured that card. Not his D-Hero Dreadmaster. Not his D-Hero Doomlord. Not even his D-Hero Dogma. The Plasma card was so special because it was the card that resembled Aster's father. That was the only memory Aster had of him......................
Ever since his father went missing.....................
But Aster never gave up hope that his father was still out there. He just needed a sign.......................
Something.............................
Suddenly, a ball of light formed in the room, growing bigger and bigger. The silloette was taking form of a familiar shape. It was the shape of Plasma. As the light faded, the monster gained it's colour. Aster gasped. Was he seeing things? Or was this this some sort of a hologram?
Once the transformation was complete, the hero gave a faint smile at Aster. Then he bowed. "I've finally found you, my lord." it said in a gruffy voice.
"My Lord? Who are you? And what do you want?" Aster asked, backing away slowly.
" I'm the Destiny Hero Plasma, or Plasma for short. And I am your Duel Spirit, searching all across the globe for you." It replied.
"Also, I bring news about your father, Thomas Phoenix."
"MY FATHER? HOW DO YOU KNOW HIM?" Aster yelled in disbelief.
" He created me to watch over you when he couldn't. But the Dark Forces seperated us when they kidnapped your father." Plasma said, frowning.
"The Dark Forces? Where are they? And where's my father?" Aster asked, with a bit of anger in his voice. He clenched his fists.
" I only know that they're in the Duel World. But your father only has a limited amount of time before.................he's........executed." Plasma answered.
" Executed? But why?"
"Because the Dark Forces think that by making the Destiny Heroes, he was mocking the Dark Forces. But I need to rescue him. But I can't do it alone. Can I ask you for your help? Plasma said.
Aster was speechless. Could he trust him? Or was it a trap?
"Please! I beg of you! Help me! Not for me but for Thomas!
".............alright..............I will." Aster agreed
Plasma smiled. "Great! But we have no time to lose!"
Plasma created a black portal with his to arms.
" Jump into this to enter the Duel World!" Plasma yelled.
Aster grabbed his Duel Disk annd Deck and ran over to the portal. Together, the twosome jumped in the portal that would lead them to the beginning of their long, cruscial journey through frigid icelands, fiery volcanoes, angry forests and tons more places to reach their destiny of rescuing Thomas Phoenix.
It's 12:05 now but I think it was worth it. Please, give me any comments or questions you have on this story. Since I'm new here. I sure do need suggestions on how to work this adventure! Thanks!

First things first. ......................................... Those dot thingys (ellipses? Can never remember how to spell that) are only ever used in groups of three. (...)
Now to your story. Your assuming that the readers know everything you do about Yu-gi-oh. My little brother watches it, so I have an idea of what your talking about - but others won't. Your writing shows reasonable skill none the less, so I won't tell you to stop or anything like that. But description of the characters is a must. I have absolutly no idea what this Pheonix guy looks like; or plasma for that matter.

Just some things to keep in mind, so continue to enjoy writing.

Yeah. I havn't done much Yu-Gi-Oh activites in a while, and arn't as familer with the new stuff like all the E-Heroes and Destiny Heroes. You should try to give some type of orgin of them, and explain them. It will just help attract more readers if they knew what you were talking about. But good otherwise.

O.K. You're right.
Before we move on to phase 2 of my story, I'll show you some pics of what I'm talking about.
The first pic shows our main character, Aster Phoenix.
The third pic shows some of his monsters, the Destiny Heroes, a series of Duel Monster Cards inherited by his father, who worked in Industrial Illusions, the home of Maximillion Pegasus' all famous Duel Monsters.
And the second pic shows where Aster first appeared, in Yu-Gi-Oh! GX.
A big thanks to Jack Bauer and LittleLeaf for your so important suggestions!
PREVEIW!
Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 2: Arrival! Enter the Duel World!
Aster and D-Hero Plasma have just entered Duel World and are confronted by the malevolent Skull Servent. The skeleton then challenges Aster to a duel! After a few turns, Skull Servant has Aster cornered by the all-powerful King of Skull Servants! How can Aster possibly defeat a monster with 5000 ATK points? Find out next time on Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
And remember, you can give me suggestions ANY TIME you want. Thx!

Very creative. How do you come up with this story?

It's a decent story but I don't think you portray Plasma to well, I think he would have more of a mysterious and imposing personality. The ending seemed rushed like you really just wanted to get it over with but other then that you definatlly show skill.

Thanks Manyara!
Well Galaxia, It takes a lot of time and efffort to come up with a great story line.
Well, here's Episode 2!
Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 1: Arrival! Battle Against the Servant of Skulls!
The portal to Duel world was not to long. It only took a split second to arrive to Duel World. Aster and plasma arrived into a world of dark skies, black trees and bloodcurdling screams in the air.
" This is World one of Duel World. It's the Evil Forest. It's owned by the all-powerful King of Skull Servants." said a anxious D-Hero Plasma.
"Don't worry Plasma. We'll advance to World 2 in no tine." Aster replied, grinning.
"I...don't...think...so..." replied a weak, shallow voice.
Aster and Plasma turned around to face a skeleton in a purple robe.
"It's a Skull Servant!" Aster gasped. "There's more Duel monsters?!" Aster asked Plasma.
Plasma nodded.
"If...you...wish..to...advance....duel...me..." Skull Servant said.
" Alright, Skull Boy! "Aster nodded. he activated his duel disk.
Skull Servant lead them to a Deuling Arena.
A black Duel Disk appeared on his left arm. He activated it, putting his deck into he Deck Holder.
S.S (Skull Servant for Short) and Aster faced each other.
"DUEL!" They yelled. (S.S and Aster LP 4000)
S.S began. " I summon Skull Servant in Attack Mode, place two Traps face down and end my turn". he spoke. His voice suddenly had more power to it.
"O.K. My Turn!" Aster yelled, drawing a card from his deck.
S.S raised a finger to him. " Not so fast. Activate Trap, The League of Uniform Nominculture! Now I can summon 2 more Skull Servants in Attack Mode".
" Well, I summon D-Hero Fear Monger. but first I Activate Raigeki, destroying all your Skull Servants!" Aster bellowed.
"Not so fast! Activate second Trap, Terrible Deal. By Paying 1000 LP, I can negate your Spell!
(S.S 3000 ).
" Then I activate this, Dark Hole, destroying all monsters onthe field.I place a Trap face down. Turn End!" Aster replied.
"Fine, I draw!' S.S grinned. "Perfect! Activate Spell, UnderWorld Search Unit! By sending two cards to my GraveYard, I can Special Summon A Level 4 or lower monster from my Grave, dirctly to my field. So I discard two King of Skull Servants to summon a King of Skull Servants!"
"Well, what's the point of that"? Aster asked.
"Because, for each Skull Servant and King of Skull Servants in my GraveYard, my King of Skull servants Gain 1000 ATK, making it 5000! So I win! Attack, my King!" S.S laughed.
"Not so fast! Activate Trap, Negate Attack! You can't attack this turn!" Aster grinned!
S.S groaned. " Fine. Turn End."
Aster drew a card, grinning.
"I win." he said. " first I summon D-Hero DoomLord. By activating his special ability, it can remove your King from play for 2 turns. Next I activate Pot of Eternal Greed! by destroying one card on my side of the field, I can draw 3 cards. Next I activate D-Hex. By discarding one card from my hand, I can add 1 Spell Card from my GraveYard back to my hand. Now I activate Necromancy! I can bring back up to 5 monsters back from your Grave back to your side of the Field. But for each one destroyed, you lose 600 LP. Finally, I activate Raigeki. It'll destroy all your monsters. And you know what that means! You take 3000 LP damage! You lose! (S.S LP 0 )
"NOOO!" S.S gasped.
"Good work Aster!" Plasma smiled.
A portal appeared. " Now to World 2, 1 step closer to saving my Father!" Aster smiled back, as the twosome once again entered the portal.
Meanwhile, S.S stood up, laughed. " That portal doesn't lead to World 2. It leads to my King's Castle, where those two Losers will have to face the Gruesome 4! S.S laughed!

PREVEIW!
Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 3: Captured! The War Fiend Appears!
Aster and D-Hero Plasma enter the King of Skull Servant's Castle against their will, and face the first of the Gruesome Four, Vorse Raider. Will Aster pull off another or will he and Plasma be thrown into the dungeon for all eternity.
Meanwhile, one of the King's prisioners try to escape. Will they be of any help to Aster and Plasma, or will she mean a World of Pain?
Find out, next time, on Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!

Great job! But once again I think Plasma should act a ittle different, being gruffer instead of smiling. Still it was great. ^^

O.K Manyara!
Here's Part 3 of this terrific series!
Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 3: Captured! The War Fiend Appears!
As Aster and Plasma ventured through the portal, Aster felt a sharp strike of pain in his right arm. he crouched down, holding his arm.
"Ow. It hurts...it REALLY hurts!" Aster moaned.
Plasma walked over but also crouched down, holding his leg.
"My leg hurts....but how?" Plasma wondered.
Suddenly, the portal stopped, throwing them out, in front of a black castle, looming over them.
"This is NOT World 2!" Plasma shouted.
Suddenly, two Headless Knights jumped out of nearby bushes, grabbing them.
" You're violating our King's Property. You must now be judged by the Gruesome Four to decide weather or not you can leave!" They cackled!
"WHAT!?!?" Aster and Plasma shouted. But they couldn't do anything about it. In their moment of pain, they were vulnerable.

The knight dragged them into the castle. Facing them was a fiend so evil-like, even Plasma shuttered. It was a Vorse Raider!It growled at the prisioners.
" I HATE intruders! I'm the first of the Gruesome Four. If you wish to escape, you must beat me, the other 3 of the Gruesome Four and possibly our King! But no intruder has ever MADE it to the King! Most of them lose to me! As will you!"
Aster stood up.
"I don't think so! I'll beat all of you and your STUPID king!"
The Raider's Eyes flared up.
" How dare you speak of our king that way? You'll pay, DEARLY!"
A Duel Disk appeared on his keft arm!
"Oh, you're on!" Aster yelled, activating his.
"DUEL!" The twosome yelled. Zombies and Fiends started to gather around to watch the fight.
Meanwhile, locked up in a small, lonely prison, was an Unhappy Maiden. She was arrested for stealing an apple from a fruit stand. In just 24 hours, she would be executed! She just had to find a way. Her pet dog, The Outstanding Dog Marron, was trying to dig under the jail wall, to the outside of the castle. If they were lucky, they could escape in 3 hours, if they didn't get caught first. Tears rolled down the Maiden's face.
" I don't want to die! Not now.........It's my Destiny to Live!"

To Be Continued.....................

PREVEIW!
Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!
Episode 4: Captured! The war Fiend Appears! Part 2!
The battle begins Aster and Vorse raider. But the raider's deck is jammed packed with High ATK Monsters. Does Aster have a Card to destroy his elite monsters? Also, does the Unhappy Maiden and her Outstanding Dog escape before its too late? All this and more on the next Episode of Yu-Gi-Oh! Countdown to Destiny!

Nice, dunno why someone would be exicuted for stealing an apple though.