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THIS UPDATES EVERY TUESDAY.


Before I begin the first chapter, I would like to introduce myself.

I am .Jb~, author of the Nubtionary and the creator of the MMc awards ceremony(does that still happen btw?). Also, I started the abbriviation MMc! Mini C is a Jb Creation! That's offtopic, however.

Whether you know me or not, you should know that I was around a long time ago and I write this story loosly based on experiences and observations. Infact, this has nothing to do with most of MMc's history. Also, this will rarely be written. I don't have access to the internet everyday, but I"ll try to get this in at least within 3 days for a new chapter. Try. Anyways, lets begin!

Chapter One

The clouds raged overhead, threatening the ground with their booming presence and dangerous flow of rain. The wind blew the rain at just the right angle to increase the pain caused by a single drop falling on the skin of a person. On top of the sacred mountain stood the chosen one. He wore a full body, hooded robe that flew in the wind and was held together by a thin strand of string. He held up a stone tablet and pulled back his hood. Looking down at the gathering below, he began to speak.

"My people... You are the future of this land. No - We are the future of this land. I, Paul, will lead us in the path of glory set in our destiny. We are no longer the separated congregation of different communities. We are now one, and we shall become the greatest unit of all time! Now, my people, what will you do? Will you follow me or will you remain the same?"

He spoke with confidence blended with nervousness. The people responded without hesitation.

"We will follow you, oh leader!"

Paul held up the stone tablet in his hand. Rain drops began to roll down his face, and his nose twitched at the slight pain of being pegged with the droplets.

"Then from here on forth, I am to be addressed as Magma Operative. Upon this mountain, I build my community! We are the Community of Mount Moon!"

The group below the mountain cheered and watched their leader Paul, who they now call Magma Operative, speak boldly to them and command respect.

"Hail Magma Operative! Long live The Community of Mount Moon!"

They chanted this for minutes before Magma Operative finally raised his hand signalling them to cease. From behind Magma Operative stepped three followers, who obviously had a higher place in the future society.

"Behold, subjects! These are they that will be deemed as your commanders! They will maintain peace between you all with their deemed power!"

Magma Operative instructed the three to step forward.

"Ye who is young, you shall be known as Commander Taco. Your job is to report any sign of disruption between the community!"

The shorter of the three walked forward on his knees, and Magma Operative placed a necklace around his neck. He then retreated backwards to the other two in line.

"Ye who is she, you shall be known as Sarah! Your job is to control the most artistic of the community and to maintain peace within all areas!"

She also stepped forward on her knees, had a necklace placed around her, and returned to her original spot.

"Ye who is last, you shall be known as Giga Hertz! Your job is to watch over the most poetic of the community, and the newer as well! You are to maintain peace in all environments likewise."

Giga Hertz stood and walked rather than walked on his knees, which appeared as a disgrace to Magma Operative.

"Does thou have an issue? Why must ye be different?"

Giga Hertz smilled, as he bowed down and stood on one knee.

"Because, your honor, I request that I have the top position below yours as well as my other responsibilities."

Magma Operative smiled, and the ground shook the instance he did.

"That is impossible. The position is already taken!"

A figure arose from the mountain. Still watching in awe, the people listened for an explanation to who the figure was.

"Wh-Who are you?" Giga Hertz asked.

"Young GHz! Worry not for who I am, because you will be informed shortly!" replied the figure.

Magma Operative stepped in. "This is my right hand man, and he who has been with me since the tragic falling of the old community at the hand of PokeCommunity. And He is - "

Magma Operative was cut off by his right hand man.

"I am Saul, he who leads! This is a bright day for us all, let us start our new world at this location!"

Saul became more visible upon speaking, and he could clearly be seen by the observers below.

"All Hail Mamga Operative! All obey Saul! All respect GHz! All honor Sarah! All ignore Commander Taco!"

The people chanted this for what seemed like an eternity, and returned to their homes later. Bearly begining, this community had a long journey ahead of them. Many new paths would unfold, but all is for a later date.


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So yeah, anyone around when MMc first started can easily recognize some of the things. For one, you should notice the names of the people. Sarah is easily identifiable, so is Magma Operative. Magma Operative was Paul's first name on MMc, or the first I saw. I knew him as that before I knew him as Paul. GHz is Josh, who indeed did go by Giga Hertz. Commander Taco, I forget what he changed his name to. He was one of the youngest moderators though. Saul is Saul. Anyone notice that Saul and Paul's names rhyme? And also, in the bible that is one person (in the New Test. of course). Questions, comments, whatever you feel necessary to say.
You spelt "GHz" right, 10 points. Also, Saul was unsaved Paul. Toungue

Seems rather interesting, hope to see me.
You're an awefully important person to the store. If you don't let people call you Josh, though, they don't know who you are in the story. lol

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I typed that without explaining why but I remembered that I didn't want to explain why when I came and edited it...
Another MMC story.. xD

Good luck with it, JB. RanDumb will be pleased to see that you're back, if he hasn't already.
It looks promising, can't wait to see more.
It's Tuesday. Sorry this chapter will be rank, but its characterization guys.

Chapter Two

The community began their lives as if they had never left their old world. Ignoring their old troubles, situations, and worries, they began a new. Previously they had all belonged to two different tribes, and found eachother in the wilderness when their leader, Magma Opeative, had found them. The two tribes then combined, becoming one. They each had a long, historic past behind them.

Saul stood, with his newly appointed second in command robe flowing in the wind as his magnificent hair had. His smile was slightly frightening, due to the mismatch of his single red and single blue eyes. This was the oddest pair of eyes in the entire community, as for usual eyes where either red, blue, or black. Some stood out as yellow. Most people lived in sections and socialized with those of similar eye color, making packs within their own. They called themselves individual names. Those with black eyes were usually associated with either Rocket Beta or Galactic Omega Zeta. It depended on the darkness of the color of their eyes. Those with blue eyes associated with the Aqua Tech Alpha. Those with red with the Magma Delta Sigma. All others were in the Allstar pack, due to the unfavorable allination based on eye color.

Saul decended from the roof of the temple of leaders, the place that all the leaders resided. Everyone who passed looked at him awkwardly, since he usually had an intesne look on his face, as if his whole world was a role play and that he was a fictional character in an online story typed based off the experiences of real people who met without prior knowledge of eachother. Quite the essentric fellow.

Entering the temple, he looked to see Paul in meditation.

"Paul... You busy?", he said, with his quiet yet intense voice.

"Quite. " Paul replied, as if he was trying to blow him off.

Saul left in his still essentric manner. Saul himself was a member of the AllStars, while Paul was the leader of Magma Delta Sigma. MDS was the most popular group due to that.

Suddenly, the gates were blew open. there stood two people, one with flaring red eyes and one with calm blue eyes. The blue eyed person was a girl, and the red eyed person was a guy. they apparently knew eachother, as for they entered together. They were thought to be seaking membership into the community. But who were these people?
I actually like this, the fact that it has this rustic feel to it. Or at least that you're implying it, x3.
Keep it up, Prince.
Hey JB! Yeah, we actually will be running MMC Awards at the end of this year. There's going to be some changes. Hope you don't mind =P You can PM me for details if you really want them, we're just not announcing our plans on the awards just yet.

And YES!! FINALLY someone notices that both my name and Paul's rhyme! 1000000 Cookies to you!
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