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Although the title makes it seem like a mystery dungeon RP, its not.

Plot: One day an evil scientist named Dr. Bob Created a machine turning all of the worlds legendary pokemon into their evil, or primal, form. Unfortunatly, all of the legendary pokemon live in hiding, so nobody could find out about the primal pokemon. Now, a group of oridinary pokemon trainers set out on a normal journey, but they do not know that after a while (about 50-80 posts) they will be on a new quest... A quest to defeat the primal pokemon and save the world from eternal Darkness. Its based in a combination of all regions because you will need to travel between all of them to find all of the primal pokemon.

To join fill in the following.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Pokemon: ( Max 4, basic forms, they can evolve and you can catch more later )
Appearence:
Personality:
Bio: ( Optional )

Mine are: Name:Gage
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Eevee ( Starter ), Duskull, Larvitar, squirtle
Appearence: Wears blue sweater, Has grey pants, has white skin, medium length brown hair, and is 5'3 in height
Personality: Is nice but hates when you are mean to his friends and then tries to own you in a pokemon battle for it

Requierments: You must make at least one post every week to stay in the RP unless you have an excuse like being on a vacation. No major bunnying is allowed, but slight bunnying like hitting their pokemon with an attack is allowed. Absolutly no godmodding is allowed.

And here is an awesome remix of the music for battling primal dialga that suits the RP perfectly http://youtube.com/watch?v=poiqPQpiTN0

The normal primal dialga music: http://youtube.com/watch?v=9D8FkBgKOK8&feature=related
This needs a bigger plot and a more structured sign up sheets.

Also, the sign up sheets need more detail; how do we know what who's like without more info?
Yeah, LC is right. On the sign-up sheet you can't just put wears a blue sweater. You can add many other things - clothing, face and eye color, build, weight, height, skin, age, blemishes and scars.

Also, while bio/history can be optional, personality should always be required. It helps set a standard to what your character should act like. You should at least define the five major traits:

The Big Five are five broad factors (dimensions) of personality traits. They are:

* Extraversion (sometimes called Surgency). The broad dimension of Extraversion encompasses such more specific traits as talkative, energetic, and assertive.
* Agreeableness. This dimension includes traits like sympathetic, kind, and affectionate.
* Conscientiousness. People high in Conscientiousness tend to be organized, thorough, and planful.
* Neuroticism (sometimes reversed and called Emotional Stability). Neuroticism is characterized by traits like tense, moody, and anxious.
* Openness to Experience (sometimes called Intellect or Intellect/Imagination). This dimension includes having wide interests, and being imaginative and insightful.

All in all, this is the most basic sign-up form:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Personality:
Appearance:
History: (Optional)

You pretty much got it down, but Personality shouldn't be optional.


You have a fairly good plot also, that could be pretty good. =D However, there is a plot hole - in the PMD games, Dialga became rampant and took over the world or something after turning primal. Also, you shouldn't break the fourth wall with the posts comment. x3

And some roleplayers would like to know additional info, such as what region it's set in, goals, etc.

It might also be good to lay down some rules for the roleplay, such as how active you need to be, what pokemon you can be, etc.

Anyway, I see you put effort into it, and with some spiffening up, it could be pretty good. =D
Alright ill add some of that stuff you put. Thanks for the advice.
Name: Len kotoro
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Riolu(nicknamed Garis) Ralts,Lotad and Eevee (nicknamed volts)
Appearence: Len is 4"7 and has white hair,black eyes and also he wears a yellow T-shirt and grey pants
Personality: Len is a bit of a hothead at times also he is so passent about battling,he tries to out-do himself but he's mostly kind
Bio: Len is the son of a retired pokemon master and voes to become the best like his Dad
Yes you can join darkness
Name: Manyara
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Vulpix, Skarmory, Spheal, Trapinch
Appearence: Green eyes with shoulder length black hair. Wears a black long sleeved shirt under a lavender backpack. Also wears a pair of plain jeans with a black belt slung over them holding her pokeballs. Around 5'5.
Personality: She is utterly dedicated to her pokemon and in turn her pokemon to her. But to all others she is sarcastic and immature. Yet if she does make friends she gets a bit nicer.
Bio: From the Hoen region.
You can join too. Now we just need one more person then we can begin to RP.
Name: Minami Yamamoto
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Absol

Personality: Minami is quietly confident, and often surprises people with her quick thinking is dire situations. Minami does not believe in the superstitions surrounding Absol. She will always standby her Pokemon partner. Though she used to be overly argumentative, she has learned when to pick her battles. She is now more of the passive type.

Appearence: Minami has short black hair and pale skin. She is quite pretty. She tends to wear the colours black and white and sometimes people say that she looks like her Absol. She prefers to wear skirts and collared shirts as opposed to jeans and t-shirts.
You can join too. Now we can start RPing! Okay now everybody just has to make one post with them going to the place inbetween all 4 regions ( Orre region dosent exist in this because orre sucks ) and then everybody meets up there and they start their journy together. Just make the meeting interesting like challenging them to a battle or somthing.

RP BEGINS BELOW THIS LINE!

Okay i have no ideas right now so.....

I was going to the place where all the regions met so i could start the journy to become pokemon master. When i finnally made it i saw 3 people coming down 3 diffeerent paths, each on a different path." Maybe i could battle one.... They could be fun. " I said to myself.
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